April 99 Winning Alternative Lyrics and Review

I am the frost upon the grass in the dead of winter. 
I am the icicles on your eyebrows when you freeze. 
I am the hail that shoots through your window, 
I am the ice crystals that stop your bloodstream. 

I am the hot molten lava erupting from a mountain 
I am the fire in your heart when it's burning with desire 
I am the geyser that spurts forth a hot water fountain 
I am the evil force that makes the temperature higher. 

I am the lightning that splits the tree in your backyard 
I am the wind and the rain that keep you indoors 
I am the thunder and the pain and the terror in your heart 
I am the scent in the air when it rains and pours. 

I am the demon in the ground that causes the quake 
I am the deterioration that brings massive corrosion 
I am the plate tectonics that makes the world shake 
I am the rocks by the river resulting from erosion 

I am every force on the planet that you could think of 
I am the devil's advocate the reaper and the angel of death 
I am the symbol of all that is good from heaven above 
I am the darkness in your eyes when you take your last breath. 
 

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These are quite interesting lyrics indeed! From the Taoist ending of the last verse (all things) to the preceding four verses (Wind, Fire, Water and Earth), there is great use of imagery. They stir the senses and push the emotions, creating a mental/physical effect. Just great! The music behind this one will have to be very strong, even bold. Good use of effects could highlight the feeling of the different verses. Careful execution of a well thought out and developed musical theme could make this a definite attention getter.

Nice work Nick, how about sending us some more.