March 99 Winning Alternative Lyrics and Review

Crawled back out of the basement 
Pulled the cobwebs from my hair 
Didn't find what I was looking for 
Anywhere, anywhere, anywhere 

Drove my car out on the highway 
Feeling free out on the run 
Found out it didn't matter 
To anyone, anyone, anyone 

Chorus 
   Don't worry about it now 
   It's just a phase I'm going through 
   Sometimes we all look for 
   Something new, something new, something new 

Little Johnny's at the front door 
Taking aim with his plastic gun 
He saw more luck in the next yard 
And he wanted some, wanted some, wanted some 

I want to take him to a new place 
Pull the cobwebs from his hair 
Doubt I'll find what I'm looking for 
Anywhere, anywhere, anywhere 

   Don't worry about it now 
   It's just a phase I'm going through 
   Sometimes you have to look for 
   Something new, something new, something new 
 

    Composition 

    Flow 

    Emotion 

            Hooks 

    Music Ability 

I like these lyrics. Metaphor, metaphor metaphor. There's nothing like good use of metaphors. These lyrics are thought provoking yet simple enough not to hurt your brain (or loose your attention). I like the emphasis created by word repeating. This will lend itself to nice musical treatment. These lyrics remind me of early Joni Mitchell. They will be served well by excellent music. That kind of sophisticated, yet seemingly easy type of music where the players have subtle little solos. No hot-dogging. The vocals have a chance to really make it here. 
 

Nice job, Lenore, how about another one?