November 98 Winning Alternative Lyrics and Review

Love is all you need, Who needs it? 
Eternal love? It's pure bullshit 
Opportunity knocking at my door? 
Too bad, I don't live here any more 

Maybe love is blind 
Maybe it's just lost its mind 
The world is at my fingertips? 
On my ass it can place its lips 

Loyalty is what I gave to you 
Through my back you ran me through 
On the day you let me loose 
My love was dead, you tied the noose 

Now as I let my life go on 
My soul feels empty, all feelings gone 
You say that maybe love's still there 
Nope, Love is dead, but I don't care 
 

    Composition 

    Flow 

            Emotion 

            Hooks 

    Music Ability 

This is, yes, a love bites tribute. I really like the title. Good imagery. I can hear this one, loud, in a club. Though it's written in a confrontational tone, it still has a kind of melodic feel. This gives it the potential for getting the message across forcefully, while still being based on good music. I think the guitar is probably the lead instrument here. Clean, technically impressive and aggressive (and did I say loud?). I even hear loud powerful drums! 

Nice going Darrin E. Matteson , now, send us some more.