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Lyrics List:
  1. Jumpers
  2. You Know My Heart
  3. The Prodigal Son
  4. This Is How It's Coming Down
  5. Always
  6. Not So Simple
  7. I Still Love You
  8. The little green vase ...
  9. Hollywood Actress
  10. Non Sequitor

 
These lyrics were written by: Chlodetta
Jumpers

Up on the sky rise
Looking down on the world below
Never thought you'd end up here
But how was I to know?
I hope you don't go down 
But I know you will 
I wish I could take this moment
And freeze it forever still

        You're a jumper who takes the fastest way
        To the ground floor and you're jumping today
        As you're feet leave the ledge
        I'll be the one trying to catch you on the edge
        But all jumpers come down
        And your jump is a long way down

The slow motion image
Of you saying goodbye
You close your eyes and
For a single moment, you fly
But then you fall
Cutting through the air
Only one last breath is left of you there
I wish you'd grow wings
And fly up to the moon
But I know the final moment
Will come too soon

        You're a jumper who took the fastest way
        To the ground floor, you jumped today
        And as your feet left the ledge
        I was the one trying to catch you on the edge
        But all jumpers come down
        And your jump was a long way down

And all the noise and sirens
Are only things in the distance
And my emptiness inside
Is so close to your flight entrance
The tears of disbelief
Wash away the image
Of your goodbye
To which I pay homage
And the few seconds of what I didn't do
Make me think how I might 
Have mentally pushed you
The cold stone I have become
Is now, with you, one

        I'm a jumper taking the fastest way
        To the ground floor, I'm jumping today
        And as my feet leave the ledge
        No one will be trying to catch me on the edge
        But all jumpers come down
        And our jump is a long way down

The moment of flight and the rush of air
Will take me to a place, and you'll be there
The jumpers that we are
The last jump to the stars      
 

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These lyrics were written by: Filomena Torres  (c) 1998
You Know My Heart

I walk the journey of my life
upon a path set out for me.
Predestined long before my birth.
But is this really how it should be?

I know there are many roads
that promise to lead me to you,
but how do I choose the one
that alone will prove to be true?

For I know I often have traveled
on roads paved with self interests and sin,
as I've searched for my purpose in life,
seeking prosperity and recognition.

And along the way I've faltered,
fallen hard to the ground on my knees,
groping blindly among the nettles,
broken and bleeding, seeking release.

I have been fooled and lured and pushed
into thoughts, actions and words
that have tainted my soul like an ink blot
left indelibly scorched and burned.
 
I know I am only a human,
fallible, faulty and weak,
ever striving for a drop of perfection
so it is your love that I seek.

But you, you know my heart,
it's full of love and hope,
ever searching for the answers
and the strength to help me cope.

And you, you know it's contents,
every tiny secret hidden there a
for it is your seed that lies within it,
growing love I need to share.

Wanting to love and to be loved,
to know joy and inner peace,
is what my heart is beating fora
won't you say you'll give me these?
 

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These lyrics were written by: Fduboo
The Prodigal Son (to Abby)

the day is over, the day is won
i turned away my prodigal son.
wand'ring far, round 'scapes surreal;
raw and tender- lovers' veal.
called so softly, crooning sweet
with syrup flowing/ from his feet.

i loved to grasp these childish things
but on his face i closed the door
(i'll tell myself she's just a bore)

somehow it will end okay,
i'll make sure it ends okay.
i've been tired all damn day
'cause i woke up for you.

i'm not tired, not anymore
my son is dead, the abortion's performed.
i hold his hand, all blood and death
and somewhere there i find my breath;
he wakes me up at night no more
(i told myself she's such a bore).
 

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These lyrics were written by: Duwayne Murrell
This Is How It's Coming Down

Listen up
This is how it's coming down
I'm here to take away your crown
and run you out of town
Listen up,
This how it's going to end up
You're going to pack up
I'm moving in and I'm drinking out of your cup
And what's yours will be mine
Because you have run out of time

For awhile now I was checking out you things
Didn't want you to know that I was looking
But in my brain something was cooking
In my eyes I saw a realtionship i should be breaking

Some will say that I am being wicked
But I saw something that I wanted
And I know I was going to get it

So this is how it's coming down
I'm going to taek away your crown
And run you out of town
Listen up, This is how it's going to end up
You going to pack up
i'm moving in and drinking out of your cup
And what's yours will be mine
Because you have run out of time
And it won't seem like I'm out of line
Because I saw the signs

Like a lion stalking your prey
I'm going to take it away
I saw a moment of weakness
And i knew it's time for me
To put on all of my sweetness
And i will move in and make what's yours mine
Because I saw the sign

If you know what's good for you
If you got a clue
Get up and move aside
Let me take my prize

This is how it's coming down
I'm going to take away your crown
And I'm going to run you out of town
Listen up, this is how it's going to end up
You're going to pack up
I'm moving in and drinking out of your cup
And what's yours will be mine
Because you have run out of time
I know I'm not out of line
Because I saw the sign

Whats' yours will be mine
You've run out of time

This is how it's coming down
This is how it's coming down...
 

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These lyrics were written by: D. McDonald
Always

Chorus
I always want to be with you
Spend the rest of my life with you
Live out our every fantasy
Cherish this reality
In our eyes our love is revealed
And you can rest assured 
This love is for real

Tonight it's cold outside
And you are not here at my side
Knowing you love me keeps me warm
Helps me weather the lonely storm

And as time slips away
I hope to be with you the coming day

Chorus-
I always want to be with you
Spend the rest of my life with you
Live out our every fantasy
You can rest assured this love is for real

Tonight the stars brightly shine
Not as bright as the thought of you in my mind
And if you ever lost your way
Take my hand I will show you the way

When I'm wide awake
i long for us to communicate
Because you are there
And I am here and it's too far away

And time slips away
I hope to be with you the coming day

Always want to be with you
Spend the rest of my life with you
Live out our every fantasy
Cherish this reality
In our eyes our love is revealed
Rest assured this love is fore real
And time slips away
And I hope to be with you the coming day

Always will be with you
Always will be here for you
Always here to wipe away your tears
Always here to scare away your fears

Always want to be with you
Spend the rest of my life with you
Live out our ever fantasy
Cherish this reality
In our eyes our love is revealed
Rest assured this love is for real

Always want to be with you
Always want to be with you
Always want to be with you
 

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These lyrics were written by: Richard
Not So Simple

Downtown subway
Limping blind
Aggressive footsteps form behind
Switchblades click in the dead of night 
To attack a man who lost his sight

Bear your arms
Bear your arms
Bear
Your
Arms

Flinging glasses form his head
Firing vengeance 
Vengalanty lead
On coming train
Subway roars
Conceals the ring of his 44

Bear your arms
Bear your arms
Bear
Your
Arms
 

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These lyrics were written by: Mae
I Still Love You 

My love is like a flower
that grows on and on.
My love is like a pizza
that never is gone.
<My love is deeper>3x

Leaving you is like tearing apart velcro that is new--
something very hard to do.
Loving you is like eating tough steak,
it chews, and chews, and chews.
<I still love you>3x

Saying goodbye is like tearing grapes from the vine,
as hard as you pull, they never release their bind.
Saying goodbye takes courage,
that is one thing I cannot find.
<I wish you were still mine>3x

Being without you is neverending discontent.
I'll be miserable without relent.
Being without you is like solitary confinment,
all alone with the bars and cement.
<I'm alone and I can't deny it.>3x

I hope you enjoy it.
 

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These lyrics were written by: Dave Hickmott
Untitled

The little green vase is still sitting on the shelf
And I already know I'll never love anyone else
I realize but don't, gotta quit kicking myself
flowers already wilted and all my thoughts, I'll have to sell
I make your problems mine, not realizing what I do
maybe you don't feel the same way but I know you could

But I know things'll turn out for the better
Even though I'm still staring at your flowers
I realize that you were always there for me
But I can't plant the seeds, you cannot see

Spontaneous actions brought home green stems form the road
Now they're all brown the blooms became a heavier load
It's a lot like us, once it's dead it's gone forever
And God help me once the water's dried up, I swear I'll leave her

Because I know things will turn out for the better
Because I still try not to stare at your flowers
And I realize that you were always there for me 
But I'll never plant the seeds, you cannot see
You'll never see

Got a call from you last Friday
Said you were leaving,again
Said I'm sorry, I don't love you anymore
But I'm not so sorry that I caused you all this pain

But I hope, things will turn out for the better
Because I try, to keep from staring at your flowers
And I realize, that you were never there for me
Because I can't plant the seeds youll never see
 

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These lyrics were written by: P. J. Radford   (c) 1999
Hollywood Actress

I wanted to be an actress
Hollywood put me on a mattress
It was a part I learned to play too well
And what I'd give for just one line
Read from a script just one time
To think I could have been an actress
Hollywood put me on that mattress

Chorus
Limousines and fast machines
Producers to unsnap my jeans
Private jets, exotic pets
Fly to Vegas and place your bets
They pass me 'round like cigarettes
Still no regrets
No regrets

I had dreams of being an actress
Hollywood put me on a mattress
If a job's worth doin' then do it well
Still if I could get the chance
Maybe star in a love-romance
To think I could have been an actress
But Hollywood put me on a mattress

Chorus
Pink champagne, dress by Versace
I got myself a big Hitachi
Caviar, base guitar
No need to tell me who you are
You say you're not throught with me yet
Still no regrets
No regrets

I went to school to be an actress
Hollywood cast me with a mattress
It was a part I learned to play too well
On my knees I got my start
Do anything to get that part

To think I could have been an actress
I really should have been an actress
If only I could be an actress
But Hollywood put me on a mattress
Hollywood put me on a mattress...
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These lyrics were written by: Lucifer Jones
Non Sequitor

God Had Mary
now dont call that libel
coz He bragged about it
all in the bible 

Managed to win her
from afar
didnt even impress her
with his car (A Lincoln Continental)

He didnt use gin
to make her get with it
just invaded her with
the holy spirit 

Chorus:
God Had Mary
now dont call that libel
coz He bragged about it 
all in the bible 

Now He didnt leave her
high and dry
managed to find her
a perfect guy 

Joseph was perfect
coz he was no brain surgeon
willing to believe in 
a pregnant virgin (Holy mackeral)

Repeat chorus
 

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