Sample of Week 2 - Alternative Lyrics Submissions

He said, "She's beautiful,
And I love her face, her eyes, her body."
And he knows she's in control,
But does he even know her?

She liked his face
She still likes but not, but not, but not him
And she'll take anyway
But she doesn't know what to give him

And he's lived his life for her,
Yah, he's lived his lies for her
And he'll bleed his wicked heart
'Till she forgives him
He'll bleed, he'll bleed, he'll bleed for her
Oh, but she is feeding!

He called you his "faerie child,"
With magic in your face, your eyes, your body.
And he can chase the glamour,
But does he see you're dreaming?

You needed his faith
You still need but not, but not, but not him
And you always said you wouldn't take
But you don't like what he's giving

And he's lived his life for you,
Yah, he's lived his lies for you,
And he'll bleed his wicked heart
'Till you forgive him
He'll bleed, he'll bleed, he'll bleed for you
Oh, but you are feinting!

He knows I'm an ugly girl
Still he wants my face, my eyes, my body.
And he see that I am honest,
But does he even hear my words?

I wanted his love
I still want but not, but not, but not him
And I promised not to take,
But it seems I do when I am giving!

And he'll end his lies with me
Yah, he'll end his life with me
And he'll flaunt his wicked heart
'Till I leave him
I'll bleed, I'll bleed, I'll bleed for him
Oh, but I am fading!
 

Please die Ana,
For as long as your here we're not,
You make the sound of laughter, 
and sharpened nails seem softer, 
And I need you know somehow, 
And I need you now somehow.

Open fire on the needs designed, 
On my knees for you, 
Open fire on my needs desires, 
What I need from you.

Imagine a pageant, 
In my head the flesh seems thicker, 
Sandpaper tears corrode the filth.

And I need you now somehow, 
And I need you know somehow.

Open fire on the needs designed, 
On my knees for you, 
Open fire for the needs desires, 
What I need from you.

And you're my obsession, 
I love you to the bones, 
And Ana wrecks your life, 
Like an Anorexia life.

Open fire on the needs designed, 
On my knees for you, 
Open fire on my needs desires, 
What I need from you, 
Open fire on my needs designed, 
Open fire on my needs desires, 
On my knees for you.
 

Seperate, but we're still the same
Differnt strategies for our game
When you look my way I feel provoked
Love rose up, then it choked

There are influences that make us feel this
There are untold fables that bind our wrists

I don't want to feel your version of bliss
When you fill me up, I feel emptiest

Listless, but our minds ablaze
Different sufferings, for one pain
When you call to me I feel compelled,
Love holds out it's hand,
just to drag us through hell

Memories never state clear facts,
they only fill in for what our conscious lacks

I don't want to hear your definition of faith
when you open your mouth I just feel betrayed
 

Deep inside I can see around
What really makes me tick?
Deep within I can see that
You really make me sick

Forget what you had coming
It's already come and gone
Forget whom you were loving
Someone stole it and they're gone

I had what I lost, exactly
I'm sure, but that is ok
Cause at least I can say I had it
And that's the least that I can say

Help me with the chorus
I'm not sure what I want to write
You always put words in my mouth
So why the f___ not tonight?

I'm sure that I haven't really found
Who I'll consider my real friends
I'm sure that it is not safe and sound
I'm sure it all will end

I'm last picked for baseball
So I get to be the water-boy
Watching everyone else hit homeruns
Alone I sit and play with my toy

I need a couple of drugs
To get my mind off of this trip
I'm losing exactly what I never had
I'm f___ed and I am dead

Just jack me up on medication
Slit my through, slit my wrists
 

Just to look at you smilin' up at me
would make me wanna try
to be everything you thought I was
a picture in my mind
this whole thing has been blown apart, 
by the tattered arguements and
the blows at my heart

Chorus:
All I ever wanted
was that place I once knew
All I ever wanted
was to share it all with you
All I ever wanted
was just a dream I had
All I ever wanted
is something I'll never have

hours rolled by so long ago
seems so far away
try to remember what it was
that turned me out this way
choices I decided on
the paths I chose to take
covered by the falling ashes
in my head
 

Say you love me
You can say you care
But when it comes down to it
I don't think you'll be there

Kiss me gently
Run your fingers, through my hair
But when it comes down to it
You've never played fair

I've got a long way to go
I guess I'll be on my way
To tell the truth
we'll never be the same again

We've been dying for years
So please stop your tears
I know you'll see in time
That maybe this is right

I can see it in your eyes
I know you see it in mine
So please let me go
'Cause I won't live a lie

I've got a long way to go
Guess I'll be on my way
To tell you the truth
we'll never be the same again
 

Your face sculpts my every move
I try to stand too far from you
You pull me closer in from light
Whatever this is it can't be right
Your cold hands trace circles on my skin
I pushed you out you held me in
You breathe me in with each kiss
I taste you now as I wish
When I feel the motion of your eyes
I know of what my muscle cries
To pull me away and help me move
If I run too far I'll feel it too
 

Standing in the line of fire
Dodging words of hate
Swimming through a sea of anger
Drowning in their fate

CHORUS:
Two that were as one before
Now tear each other down
Walls together built with love
Now defend each sacred ground

The boy is sad and wants to love
Becomes a flightless bird
Mom is busy with her drink
And dad cuts down with words

The echo's of this broken home
Reach into the childs life
As he grows and tries to cope
He beats his helpless wife

REPEAT CHORUS (above)

Raising up the hand that strikes
He wipes away a tear
Dealing with the pain inside
He drinks another beer

REPEAT CHORUS
 

eisus rof was a vision
something unreal
        not of this world.
a dream of a young boy
make me a picture
        my perfect girl.

boy turned into manhood 
and eisus rof was, well,
         further than ever
and he began to doubt life
he began to doubt himself
        though not very clever

and then when time seems over
at least not beginning
        not now anyway
eisus rof appeared from nowhere
like a gypsy in the night
        forever, oh, pray.

but, alas, as all else
eisus rof was but a vision
        not of this world
cause the living can't choose
what hasn't been planned
        by a twist nor a twirl

and as he watched her leave
he wondered what could
        what could be done
to make the dream stay
then all could smile and
        he'd know he'd won.

but eisus rof had other plans
and his was not part
        not within or without
so eisus rof made her way homeward
and he watched with tears
        not his nor her's.
and his hand reached toward the sky
where dreams come from
        and fools flock to touch
and touch he did, for wisdom
and comfort of knowing
        he wasn't asking too much.

and did she turn around
and did she notice too
        his arm stretched with need
and did she stop to hold his hand
and feel the warmth of touching
        a love, a heart to feed

she did, eisus rof
she too stretched and he
        who had waited since birth
found her warmth as expected
a love to last a lifetime
        a waiting with worth.
 

Listen up lola
i don't think we're gettin' along
you seem fake to me
you seem fiction to me
listen up lola
im tired of your fits
i don't like you one bit
but ill stick along for the ride
lola fiction made me do it 
ms. fiction got me into it
hopefully i can get out of this relationship
listen up lola
you've got so much pain
on your neurotic mind
i might be stupid to stay
c'mon lola you're so brillant
i'd thought you'd beat me
in your little game
c'mon lola
you've got a price to pay
and you won't get your way
cuz i am not your slave
listen lola
you can trust me
i won't mess with you
and you wont mess with me
listen lola do you feel the same
i hope you do.....someday