Sample of Week 3 - Alternative Lyrics Submissions

Here are some samples of this weeks lyrics.
Lyrics List:
  1. You make me complete ...
  2. Gone away ...
  3. The Cold
  4. True Pain
  5. What It's All About
  6. In Your Eyes (No Longer)
  7. May I Borrow Your Denial?
  8. Absolution
  9. Loss
  10. Legion: For We are Many
These lyrics were written by: Dana Rossmeier
Untitled

You make me complete.
When we touch I feel the heat.
This ring means forever.
We'll leave each other never.
I love you with all my heart.
I swear we'll never part.

(chours)
I love you.
Our love is true.
Our love is pure.
Our love won for sure.
We are soul mates.
Yes, It's fate.

The vows we made.
They'll never fade.
The good times we share, 
I'll remember and care.
I promise to stay positive.
For you and our love I'll give.

(chours)
I love you.
Our love is true.
Our love is pure.
Our love won for sure.
We are soulmates.
Yes, it's fate.

Look at us we are still going strong.
The times we spend together will last oh so long.
I love you forever and more.
Our love will soar.
My heart incircles with your love.
I thank God he sent you from above.

(chours)
I love you.
Our love is true.
Our love is pure.
Our love won for sure.
We are soul mates.
Yes, it's fate.
 

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These lyrics were written by: Anrea Anderson
Untitled

Gone away
Within the shadows I stay
In the darkness 
My life grows dim
I reminisce on where we've been
Without you I am lost 
To this world I've never known
I'm standing in the doorway and feeling so alone
Seeking Darkness
Hide away
These visions just don't go away
Seeking Darkness
Fade away
Oh, I have to face another day
The world is so cold
And the fire is so hot
I'm screaming out your name
I've never been taught
How to see the world with eyes of my own
How to face the world with the love I've outgrown
So I'm seeking Darkness to hide away
Until these Visions just go away
Seeking darkness 
I'm fading away
How can I face another day?
 

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These lyrics were written by: Leigh Summerfield
The Cold

I took your hand as you turned to face the cold
I touched your face but the sun was already gone
Now i'm feeling the gaping wound of scars that won't heal, 
the stars have fallen down and your eyes the carn't feel
You told me you would be here
Said you would never leave
I thought we'd be together but where you've 
gone i just carn't be

CHORUS:
Will i see you again when the sun meets the sky
Will i see you again will i know the reason why
I take your hand and you'll be there
When i touch you again i'll have no fear

In the distant sky above i feel you watching me
And when the wind bears down the cold cuts through my dreams
I want to turn away and leave it all 
But your ove shines on through my crumbling walls

CHORUS:

I took your hand as you turned to face the cold 
I touched your face but the sun was already gone
You told you would be here
Said you would never leave
Thought we be together but where you've gone i just carn't be
Will i see you again
Will i no the reason why
When i touch you again i'll have no fear
No fear, no fear ohhhhhh
 

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These lyrics were written by: Devil's Advocate
True Pain

I FEEL SO SICK
I AM AS HEAVY AS A BRICK
I AM HELPLESS
I FEEL SO CURELESS
I FEEL DEAD
MY BODY IS GOING UNFED
I CAN BARELY SEE STRAIGHT
MY REGUALAR PERSONALITY I AWAIT

IS SHE FEELING THE SAME
I DOUBT SHE FEELS N E SHAME
DOES SHE CARE
THAT MY HEART IS STARTING TO TEAR
SHE CANT FEEL AS BAD AS THIS
FOR I MISS EVERY KISS
MAYBE SHE WANTED IT TO END MORE THE I FIGURED
DOES SHE TOO FEEL INCREDIBLY AWKWARD

I THINK I AM LOSING MY REASON TO LIVE
EVERYTHING I TRY TO DO HAS NO MOTIVE
I AM SO LOST
EVERYTHING IN MY LIFE HAS SUDDENLY BECAME CRISSCROSSED
SHE WAS EVERYTHING I HAD
WITH OUT HER I AM A GOD DAMN NOMAD
I CANT STOP THINKING
ABOUT HOW SOON THINGS STARTED ENDING

DOES SHE KNOW HOW MUCH SHE IS MISSED
HER LOVE I MUST RESIST
DOES SHE HATE THE CHANGE
OR DOES SHE LIKE HOW EVERYTHING IS REARRANGED
CAN SHE SLEEP AT NIGHT
DOES ALL THE LIGHT SEEM INCREDIBLY BRIGHT

LOOK AT MY EYES
THEY ARE LIKE THAT FROM BEING UP UNTILL SUNRISE
MY STOMACH ACHES
THIS IS THE PAIN THAT LOVE MAKES

SHE STILL LOOKS PERFECT
AS THOUGH SHE FACES NO CONFLICT
IT MUST BE NICE
TO NOT NEED ANYONES ADVICE

DOES N E ONE FEEL THE WAY I DO
DOES ANYONE CARE ABOUT MY ISSUE
IS ANYONE AS LONELY
CAN ANYONE FEEL MY MISERY
IS THIS BEST TO KEEP TO MYSELF
JUST LIKE SHE KEEPS IT TO HERSELF
I DONT KNOW HOW TO GET EVERYTHING BACK
CUZ I THINK I STILL SHOULD HOLD BACK
I NEED TO FIGURE OUT JUST WHAT I AM GONNA DO
I NEED SUMTHING...ANYTHING....TO PURSUE
 

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These lyrics were written by: Randall Fietz
What It's All About

Sitting alone inside her bedroom
Wondering what it was she done today
Thinking of all the friends she can't see now
Thinking of all the things that she could say
There is no phone for conversation
Her mind is in a wishing well
And so the night goes on without the sound
Michelle
Your ship has come in on an angle
And though your lights don't seem so bright
Your attitude still it compels you
And thus another lonely 
Oh you know
Just waiting for an answer
Just waiting by the door
Lingering in disaster
Sure thing you're not so sure
Can you tell me why you always seem so, so sad
Did you find your own way out
Is that what it's all about
I think so
That's what it's all about
 

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These lyrics were written by: Rachel D. Genia
In Your Eyes (No Longer)

It hurts- the way you shut me out
I've always been here for you
But she calls the shots now
I cry- the tears stain my face like blood
I've always been in love with you
I guess I haven't hurt enough

It seems, in your eyes, that no one is better than she
You no longer care for me
You no longer bleed for me

It's killing me- the way I've lost your time
I've always stood still for you
Now you're leaving me behind
It's strange- the way I save my breath
I've always shared my dreams with you
I guess I'll take this one to my death

It seems, in your eyes, that no one is better than she
You no longer have a need for me
You no longer live for me

Now you have forgotten me
sadly you've no want for me

It hurts- the way you shut me out
I've always been there for you
But she calls the shots now
It seems, in your eyes, that no one is better than she
You no longer care for me
 

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These lyrics were written by: Lorie Kramer
May I Borrow Your Denial?

May I borrow your denial, just for a while?
I really could use it to stop all the fear.
Or maybe, just show me how you do it so easily.
Turn off the feelings, make them disappear.

May I borrow your denial? It seems to work wonders.
I'd hide all the pain that I feel everywhere.
If you could just teach me, I'd be a good student.
I've got lots to work with, no problem there.

I can't seem to catch on, it all overwhelms me.
So many emotions my soul cannot bear.
If you could just lend me enough for protection,
then I could deny that you don't seem to care.
 

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These lyrics were written by: Darrin E. Matteson
Absolution

Can you imagine this?
My life is torn in two
My dreams don't matter
I can't even begin to think that straight

When the pain consumes you
And your heart can't wait
Any more
What the hell do you do?

At night I stay up and wait
For an answer
That I know will never come
An absolution 
from the pain that I can no longer bear

Which way is up, which way is down?
My world is spinning all around
You had the answer
why did you have to close the door?

They say it grows easier
with each passing day
But what the hell do they know?
this hurt won't go away

My future's empty 
My dreams mean nothing to me
Any more
What the hell am I supposed to do?

At night I stay up and wait
For an answer
That I know will never come
An absolution 
from the pain that I can no longer bear

Which way is up, which way is down?
My world is spinning all around
You had the answer
why did you have to close the door?

I think of what we had
is one last embrace too much to ask?
I try to let go
My heart just won't release our past

When pain consumes you
and tears are all you know
Any more
Why is life so empty without you?

At night I stay up and wait
For an answer
That I know will never come
An absolution 
from the pain that I can no longer bear

Which way is up, which way is down?
My world is spinning all around
You had the answer
why did you have to close the door?
 

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These lyrics were written by: Paul Day
Loss

No one can touch you.
You feel so ashamed.
Other people hurt because of you, but you aren't to blame
The other people hurt with you, but I don't.
I feel your dismay
Because of your loving ways.

Is it me you long for?
Or do your friends choose?
Either way you are to lose.

Whisper love and life into my body.
We are empty and need each other.
You are lonely and need another
Longing for a life away from them.
I approach and you push me down.
Nothing ever touches your face except a frown.

Is it me you long for?
Or do your friends choose?
Either way you are to lose.

Is it me you long for?
Or do your friends choose?
Either way you are to lose.

Is it me you long for? 
Or do you simply want to feel loss?
 

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These lyrics were written by: Johnny Ace
Legion: For We are Many

He's gotta brain like choking weed 
His ol' heart is an angry thorn
And he sows the bitter seeds
of hatred and scorn...
There's a fork in his row
He follows the flame
Above him flies a crow
And it cries out his name...

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Legion: For We are Many  ( three times)
Beg for tender mercy
Here there is none
Here there's only cursing
In the shadows of the sun

She's alone in her chambers
When the telephone rings
The voice is a strangers
And there's burnt offerings...
Presiding on the bench
her robe mops her brow
But her eyes never flinch
As she cashes in her vows

Legion: For We are Many

You should be more grateful
For ev'rything I do
ev'rything I do; afterall,
I do for you
You can thank me for that roof up above
So crawl up on my knee child
And show me some love...

Legion: For We are Many 
 

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