April 99 Winning Blues Lyrics and Review

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These winning lyrics were written by: **Holly Gardner** (c) 1999
One More Chance 1st Verse At the club the other night People packed wall to wall Someone spilled his drink on me But I didn't care at all I had my eye on you Like you were the only man around I've seen the way you move Like you know how to get down Chorus One more chance And I'll let you know I'm the only real woman here Not like these silly ho's One more chance To tell me your name You're the only real man I see And I'm liking your game 2nd Verse Monday morning back at work Your face still in my head I can't concentrate no more Wanna see you instead Wish I had made a move But I was so intimidated I ain't never been shy I don't know why I waited Bridge It really ain't a thang But I gotta know your name Skin like caramel I want to touch you everywhere Tossing and turning All night long I think you could put me at ease And I don't think I'm wrong

This review written by LyricsReview.com judge: **Mo Dal**
Score: Composition Flow Emotion Hooks Music Ability 13 Total Score	Lyrics: One More Chance Author: Holly Gardner Judges Comments: Missed opportunity at love is one of the common themes of "the blues". With any good blues song, it is not only good music or what you're saying, but how you're saying it. I like these lyrics. At first glance they might seem the usual. However, if you take a closer look at the phrasing and the key words, you'll start to get a feel for how well these lyrics could go with the music. I hear a strong low female voice. I think a slow tempo would be perfect. Good single lead guitar would go along way towards complementing the vocals. Alright! Please, Holly, send us some more!

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