August 98 Winning Blues Lyrics and Review

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These winning lyrics were written by:  Al Geers
 The Meaning 

Your born into this world 
By your mama and your pa 
You come in with your body 
And that is all 

They raise you up so fine 
To be a good man 
Then they kick you out that door 
And there you stand 

Now there ain't no one direction 
That you think you should go 
And there ain't no time to figure 
Just time to move you know 

And if your life ain't go no meaning 
By the time it's half through 
Don't let it bug ya 
That's my advice to you 

Just have yourself some children 
With some lady that you met 
And the answer to your life 
Is just some question that you forget 

I said 

The answers to your life 
Are just questions you forget. 
 

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This review written by LyricsReview.com judge:  Mo Dal
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    14           Total Score
Lyrics:  The Meaning
Author: Al Geers
 

Judges Comments:

This is a little "heady" for a blues tune. Definitely reflective. Questions and answers. It tells us a story with cold blunt feeling. The song would probably feature the vocals. Done slow and real bluesy, this could be a "thinker". I think some good hard pickin would do well here, maybe a little sloppy. You know the effect. I liked the story and felt it too. 

That's the way to tell it Al Geers, please send us some more. 
 
 
 
 

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