December 98 Winning Blues Lyrics and Review

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These winning lyrics were written by: Denny Prussian
 
She lights another cigarette, bums another drink, 
she's wrapped in polyester but she's actin' like it's mink, 
She's proppin up the Coochie Bar to watch the tide come in, 
At 6 AM tomorrow she'll see it out again. 

She's a mean vicious woman 
She's down and dirty crude 
Yeah she's a hard, evil lady 
with a bad attitude 

She was never much for lovin', she was never good for men, 
she'd chew 'em up and spit 'em out and chew 'em up again, 
she'll be grinnin' if you ask her 'bout the ones who put her down, 
she'll say " if you're lookin' for 'em, look 'bout six feet underground. 

She's a mean vicious woman, 
She's down and dirty crude, 
Yeah she's a hard, evil lady 
with a bad attitude. 

Ain't no moral to this story, ain't no reason to this rhyme 
's just somethin' that I'm doin' to help me pass the time 
Y'see I'm lying here in hospital I've got the cuts to prove 
I went messin' with a woman with a bad attitude. 
 

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This review written by LyricsReview.com judge:  Mo Dal
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    14           Total Score
Lyrics:  She lights another cigarette
Author: Denny Prussian
 

Judges Comments:
 
I can already hear this one playin' in a laid back smoky little club. Sort of a Dr. Hook kind of sound. I am really impressed with these lyrics. They embrace a bluesy feel, while being more developed than a lot of blues tune; telling a good story. I definitely here a strong blues piano on this one. I think a slower paced rhythm with a light background rhythm guitar would be nice. A soft lead guitar rifting in occasionally would add a lot. This is my kind of blues! Excellent work.

That's it Denny Prussian, you've got to send us some more. 
 
 
 
 

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