February 99 Winning Blues Lyrics and Review

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These winning lyrics were written by: Bev Martinez
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My baby, ooh ooh ooh, my baby, 
well  my baby, she ain't no good for me. 

I met my girlfriend at the liquor store. 
She weren't no girlfriend 
she wuz just a (whore). 

I took her home 
and told her to cook me some bread 
She rolled her eyes up 
in the back of her head. 
I said, "yeah, while you're at it 
cook me some beans too! 
Women does ya hear me talkin' to you?" 

She looked up at me 
and said with a smile, 
"You got life (f*cked) up, 
Honey chil'd." 

Chorus: 
My baby, ooh ooh ooh, my baby, 
I said my baby, she ain't no good for me. 

My baby always dresses in black. 
High heel boots 
and eyes like a cat. 
I wanted her to meat my Momma one day 
but I could just imagine 
what Momma would say, 
"Honey, where did you pick this one up? 
She look like a hooker 
and talks like a truck - driver." 

She don't wanna meet my Momma, 
she don't wanna meet my Pa. 
She just wanna lay around the house 
and watch T.V., that's all. 

But, that's my baby, yeah, 
that's my girl, 
I says my baby 
she driues me outta this world. 

Chorus: 
My baby, ooh ooh ooh, my baby. 
You know my baby she just ain't no good for me. 

When I come home from work, 
I don't get no food, 
I want my baby but she ain't in the mood. 
I look around, the house is a mess 
and where is my baby?, 
well she's gettin' dressed - to go out. 

Chorus: 
My baby, ooh ooh ooh, my baby, 
well my baby, she ain't no good for me. 

One of these days 
I'm gonna find a nice girl, 
with eyes like an angel 
and hair done in curls. 
But, for now 
I'm gonna stay with my baby, 
I have to admit, 
She ain't much of a girlfriend 
but, I ain't gonna quit - her. 

'Cause she's my baby, 
yeah, she's my girl. 
One of these days 
she'll put my head in a whirl. 

Chorus: 
'Cause she's my baby, ooh ooh ooh, my baby. 
Well, I said my baby, she just ain't no good for me. 
 

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This review written by LyricsReview.com judge:  Mo Dal
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    13           Total Score
Lyrics:  Untitled
Author: Bev Martinez
 

Judges Comments:
 
Blues lyrics often tell the tale of uneasy love and hard relationships. This type of music seems to lend itself to expressing difficult situations. These lyrics cover everything from how they met to cooking and cleaning to meeting the folks. Simple thoughts waiting to complement simple and direct music. These lyrics are written so well (and bluesy), you can almost hear the music. I keep hearing a loud harp wailing in the background. This could be a bar favorite.

Way to go Bev Martinez , we want to hear more, please. 
 

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