January 99 Winning Blues Lyrics and Review

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These winning lyrics were written by: **Scott Rhoades, Francis Greene**
Prenatal Blues I am so pregnant and it feels so bad It's the worst pregnancy a girl's ever had My stomach is hurtin' and my hips they are too And I'll tell you this hubby it's all because of you Got the prenatal blues The prenatal blues I really wish honey I could put you in my shoes My back it is achin' my feet they are sore I retain so much water that I can't hold no more I wake up so hungry but I can't eat a lick 'Cos when you make bacon it makes me feel sick Got the prenatal blues The prenatal blues I really wish honey I could put you in my shoes I get so tired but I just can't sleep I must have counted half a million sheep I feel so fat and my clothes don't fit I tell you man I'm getting' sick of it I'm getting' that feeling down close to my womb I'm beggin' you darling let me use the bathroom When this baby is born be your turn to pay To buy all those diapers you'll work night and day Got the prenatal blues The prenatal blues I really wish honey I could put you in my shoes I can't bend down I can't see my knees I can't eat fries greasy steak or cheese But still I'm fat and my clothes don't fit I tell you man I'm gettin' sick of it I am so pregnant and it feels so bad It's the worst pregnancy a girl's ever had My stomach is hurtin' and my hips they are too And I'll tell you this hubby it's all because of you Got the prenatal blues The prenatal blues I really wish honey I could put you in my shoes

This review written by LyricsReview.com judge: **Mo Dal**
Score: Composition Flow Emotion Hooks Music Ability 15 Total Score	Lyrics: Prenatal Blues Author: Scott Rhoades, Francis Greene Judges Comments: I believe a good blues tune makes you "feel" something. The words tell the story while the music sets the mood. Here, the lyrics are so well written, they set the mood. There is already a bluesy sort of swing to the rhythm of the words. These lyrics express, very well, this wonderful and trying condition. Nice hook "I really wish honey I could put you in my shoes". Oh yeah, a female lead vocal and backup. I hear a medium to faster paced rhythm, with a predominate bass. The words are the focus here. This could easily be a good crowd pleaser. Great writing. Alright Scott Rhoades, Francis Greene, please send us some more.

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