March 99 Winning Blues Lyrics and Review

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These winning lyrics were written by: **Cindy Lewis**
How Can I Put It Baby, I've got a future Baby, I've got a past Baby, I've got a present for you Full of love that's sure to last Baby, I've got loving eyes Baby, I've got biding dreams Baby, I've got open arms To draw you into the sweetest peace How can I put it down in words Each attempt gets crumpled and tossed How can I put it down in words Lord, I'm at a loss, how can I put it How can I get my point across Baby, I've got a pan Baby, I've got a fire Baby, I've got something hardy cooking It's a powerful, strong desire Baby, I've got no mysteries Baby, I've got nothing to hide Baby, I've got volumes of love To page through if you're so inclined How can I put it down in words Each attempt gets crumpled and tossed How can I put it down in words Lord, I'm at a loss, how can I put it How can I get my point across I love you How can I put it down in words Each attempt gets crumpled and tossed How can I put it down in words Lord, I'm at a loss, how can I put it How can I get my point across

This review written by LyricsReview.com judge: **Mo Dal**
Score: Composition Flow Emotion Hooks Music Ability 13 Total Score	Lyrics: How Can I Put It Author: Cindy Lewis Judges Comments: Though these lyrics have a more modern read to them, I can still feel the classical blues rhythm. Love sings the blues. I like the use of "Baby", it helps give it that personal, "Honey listen, 'cause I'm singin to ya" sound. The chorus has an interesting emphasis in the last two lines. I hear a medium paced traditional blues rhythm, with all the usual solos. A good strong harp played in the background and prominently soloed, would set this song off. Real bluesy vocals, probably male, should be the focus of what you hear. The music should supports this, and then punch it in the solos. This will make a great blues song. Good job Cindy, please let us hear more.

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