August 98 Winning Contest Lyrics and Review

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These winning lyrics were written by:  White Fang
 Scrub Scrub Scrub 

Scrub scrub scrub 
To keep them pearlies clean 
If you would only scrub 
I would not be so mean 

Your teeth are like your puppy 
You must care for them 
If you treat them nicely 
They will be your friend 

Your teeth are very handy 
They help you chew your food 
When ever you get hungry 
When you are in the mood 

They will serve you always 
They will not hesitate 
But you must keep them strong 
Or maybe they might break 

Each time that you use them 
You must scrub them for awhile 
For the better that you keep them 
The nicer is your smile 

So scrub scrub scrub 
To keep them pearlies clean 
The brighter that you keep them 
The more they will be seen 
 

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This review written by LyricsReview.com judge:  Figaro
Score:

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    Flow 

            Emotion 

            Hooks 

            Music Ability 



    11           Total Score
Lyrics:  Scrub Scrub Scrub
Author: White Fang
 

Judges Comments:

I can't tell if this one is, pardon the pun, "tongue in cheek" or a serious oral hygiene march song. I'm going to try it on my kids. It sounds like something you'd hear on Barney. Still, with the right playful music and easy tempo, this could be a public service message. And of course, our teeth play an important part in the sound (singing) of music.

Keep it up White Fang and send us some more. 
 
 
 
 

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