January 99 Winning Contest Lyrics and Review

Presents and bows 
Ribbon and snow 
Santa comes to you tonight 
Trees and stars 
Trains and cars 
All the childrens eyes are bright 

But what about the ones who get nothing from this day 
What about the kids who can't hear Santa's sleigh 
What about the ones who don't have family or friends 
What about the child whose pain never ends 

During this time of year let's all give thanks and cheer 
But we can't forget the ones who need it most this holiday 
Let's give a hug to everyone who needs a helping hand 
Let's show love to everyone all over this great land 
Let's show peace, tranquility, happiness, and joy 
To all the world at Christmas time 
For every girl and boy 

What about the ones who get nothing from this day 
What about the kids who can't hear santa's sleigh 
A child's out their crying wishing for a day 
of peace and love and happiness and joy on Christmas day 
 

    Composition 

            Flow 

    Emotion 

    Hooks 

            Music Ability 

It's easy to focus on you and yours during the holiday season and it is wonderful to be able to do so. These lyrics do well at keeping a positive feeling while reminding us of those less fortunate. Choosing children as the focus is especially effective. With the right music this could be a successful Christmas season "pleasant sounding but makes you think" song. Very good.

Thank you Kristen C.,  please send us more.