March 99 Winning Contest Lyrics and Review

Here are this months winning lyrics along with its review.

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Theme - It WEATHER
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Rewrite - It NEW YORK, NEW YORK
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These winning lyrics were written by: **Mila Daniel** (c) 1999 Mila Daniel
Heat Sweltering summer heat Indigo sky, Sweat glistening in the moonlight I need a cool high To ease the tension But I lost my connection, Baby said goodbye. Night turns into day Sun is blazing, Sitting here melting my soul away. No use gazing Down that dusty street, No one there to meet. Baby's out chasing A new beat. Heat I'm wavering in the flow, Got nowhere to go, Baby's gone I'm alone, Left me crying Frying, in the heat. Night falls like a stone Black as Hades, I'm cooked through to the bone I need my Baby's Windy smile to cool me His icy wiles to fool me But Baby's doing me wrong. He's gone Left me crying Frying, dying, (Death would be sweet) In the heat.

This review written by LyricsReview.com judge: **Tem Po**
Score: Composition Flow Emotion Hooks Music Ability 13 Total Score	Lyrics: Heat Author: Mila Daniel Judges Comments: These lyrics are "hot", pardon the pun, because of the effective use of the play between the senses and lost love. Mila uses physical duress to portray mental anguish. This is much easier to read than the usual hurting love song. I hear this with sort of a jazz sound. Female vocal set against melodic and rhythmic back ground. An accentuated, very expressive vocal style would work nicely. Very good, Mila Daniel, let us hear more, please.

These winning lyrics were written by: **Mary K. Randolph**
Fried Pork, Fried Pork No Orthodox Jews Will want our special today But you should make the most of it Fried Pork, Fried Pork And you get to choose Fried rice or lomain Wait til you get a taste of it! Fried Pork, Fried Pork, You can get take out or eat it in with us, It's just as cheap! And you can Eat til you're filled Eat all you can We've got a buffet That'd please Charlie Chan! (KEY CHANGE!) We even sell booze! Drink Tsing Tao for days! It compliments the taste of it Fried Pork, Fried Pork If you don't eat it here It's not Fried Pork I fear It's just for you, Fried Pork, Fried Pork!!!

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This review written by LyricsReview.com judge: **Al Legro**
Score: Composition Flow Emotion Hooks Music Ability 14 Total Score	Lyrics: Fried Pork, Fried Pork Author: Mary K. Randolph Judges Comments: I love this contest! Each person has a different twist on life and here is the place to show it. Wouldn't it have been fun to hear the old crooner do this one. Mary, you nailed it! It is sometimes harder than you might think to match up lyrics with existing music. I really enjoyed the use of ethnic emphasis and found it wildly appropriate for the venue and city. Bravo! Good one Mary K., how about some more?

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