Sample of Week 3 - Contest Lyrics Submissions

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Lyrics List:
  1. Rewrite - It      Tinkle, tinkle
  2. Theme - It        Deeper Into Debt
  3. Theme - It        Debt
  4. Theme - It        The debt you owe, His son has paid
  5. Rewrite - It       Sittin, drinkin in this bar
  6. Rewrite - It       One Night Stand - Almost
  7. Rewrite - It       Twinkle, twinkle goes my brain
  8. Theme - It         It's hard to understand
  9. Job - It              It's a code 55 in the ER drive
  10. Theme - It         Good Weather You Do
These lyrics were written by: Sam Lyle
Untitled

Tinkle, tinkle movie star,
In the alley of a bar.
Soon appears Pavarotti.
Now the world will watch you pee.
Tinkle, tinkle movie star,
Soon we’ll wonder who you are.
 

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These lyrics were written by: Don Bridges  © 1999 don bridges
Deeper Into Debt

First class, first team
First chance at livin' the American Dream
First day spent in the campus yard
When they hand me a shiny new card
But if i knew then what i know about today
2I'd have thrown it back and sprinted away
Screamin'

DEEPER INTO DEBT
Workin' up a sweat
Prayin' for a miracle
that hasn't happened yet
Never can forget 
all the choices i regret
Goin' DEEPER INTO DEBT
DEEPER INTO DEBT

Next month, next shock
Next chance a-comin' i'm a-gonna take stock
Next day spent at a local shrink
I'm a pauper before i can blink
But if i'd known then 'bout the compound APR
I'd have thrown myself in front of a car
Let's rock!

REPEAT CHORUS

The friendly lenders
and goodfella tellers
Have got me by the bills
If there's a way to take my blood
They will

Last hope, last chance
Last-ditch rejection for a credit advance
Last night spent in a cardboard box
Now i'm learnin' it's money that talks
Although i know now what i didn't know of then
I'd still throw around some plastic again
Let's dance!

REPEAT CHORUS

Workin' up a sweat
Prayin' for a miracle
that hasn't happened yet
Never can forget
all the choices i regret
Goin' DEEPER INTO DEBT
DEEPER INTO DEBT
DEEPER INTO DEBT
DEEPER INTO DEBT
DEEPER INTO DEBT
DEEPER INTO DEBT
DEEPER INTO DEBT
DEEPER INTO DEBT
 

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These lyrics were written by: Matt Stokes
Debt

Son, there are many kinds of debt in life
That a man just cannot bear.
There's the debt of love and honor, 
that friends might often share.

But the one I'm tellin' you about,
Can tear your home apart.
Make your loved ones cry at night,
And break your mama's heart

The debt that I owe, goes clear to my soul.
I made this bed and now I'll have to sleep.
If you could learn a damned thing from your old man's crooked life, 
It's better to be a poor man than a criminal like me.

I can still remember, 
When you were just a kid.
The night the police came a lookin',
And I lay down and hid.

That was the first time,
I ever felt ashamed.
The example I was settin' then
Placed one foot in the grave.

The debt that I owe, goes clear to my soul.
I made this bed and now I'll have to sleep.
But the one thing that I've learned from my soiled and crooked life,
Is the most sacred things aren't always yours to keep.

Every day I try to tell myself, it's not too late to change.
But the thought of you keeps swirlin' in my head.
I'd like to think it was just a dream and now it's time to wake,
But the truth is I brought on this curse, and now my son is dead.

The debt that I owe, goes clear to my soul.
I made this bed and now I'll have to sleep.
But if I learned a damned thing from my sullen, hollow life,
It's that love is most important to your children and your wife.

Son, there are many kinds of debt in life,
That a man just cannot bear.
There's the debt of love and honor,
That friends might often share.

But the one I'm tellin' you about,
Has torn our home apart.
It's changed this damned old fool,
And broke your mama's heart.
 

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These lyrics were written by: Kirk Hoffman
Untitled 

The debt you owe, His son has paid
praise and rejoice, in His name
look onto Him for insight
He'll provide your needs in life
the debt you owe, His son has paid
praise and rejoice, in His name
 

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These lyrics were written by: Kirk Hoffman
Untitled 

Sittin, drinkin in this bar
caught you looken,from afar
up against that old juke box
thigh high skirt and bobby sox
sitten,drinkin in this bar
caught you looken,from afar
 

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These lyrics were written by: Pervy Phil
One Night Stand - Almost

I met a woman in a bar
she looked so fine from a far
I asked her home and she agreed
I got worried when she took the leed
She lost her clothes and in disbelief
I discovered her name was kieth
 

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These lyrics were written by: Jeff Caufield
Untitled 

Twinkle, twinkle goes my brain,
Should have learned to drive a train.
Flying ' round the world so high,
I'm so drunk I shouldn't fly.
Twinkle, twinkle goes my brain.
I'd do better on a crane.

Twinkle, twinkle landing light,
Hope I land this sucker right.
Mortgaged up the ass, I'm broke.
Flying high with too much coke.
Twinkle, twinkle landing lights.
Turn them off, too friggin' bright.

Twinkle, twinkle Major Tom. 
Sometimes think I'm still in 'Nam.
My debts don't mean **** to me.
When I defy gravity.
Twinkle, twinkle Major Tom.
Where the Hell did we leave from?
 

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These lyrics were written by: Kate
Untitled 

It's hard to understand how to deal with the plastic.
That piece of paper doesnt go very far.
All of a sudden you've been caught with bad credit.
And you cant get your hand out of the Jar. 

Your victim of the American Game
Spend Spend spend and then spend it again.
Pretty soon you'll have all that you wanted.
But have you ever heard the words "15 minutes of Fame"? 

Notcie how your so-called "freinds" wallets seem to be empty to you.
Your life has been repoed and your wife just left.
And you wonder how got into this life in theft. 

Your victim of the American Game
Spend Spend spend and then spend it again.
Pretty soon you'll have all that you wanted.
But have you ever heard the words "15 minutes of Fame"? 

Now you listen to the rain hitting your cardboard roof.
There is nothing left for you to do.
But try to win that next big bet.
Who knew you would in up in this gamble called debt.
 

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These lyrics were written by: Wing Dings
Untitled 

It's a code 55 in the ER drive 
A man unarmed with just one arm 
Lock the doors, sound the alarm 
Screaming and yelling, in some crazed fit 
In a hospital gown flashing a bit 
The nurses have surrounded him, with needles in hand 
Watch it ladies, he's an unarmed, one armed man 
He's bleeding from his nose and he seems disillusioned 
and somehow he stubbed his toe in all this confusion 
He's malnutritioned, and he's got a bad rash 
Get dietary here and get me some neosporin fast 
Call his family in case we need a donor for him 
And get a cold pack for the bruise on his shin 
He's disoriented and dyslexic, and his heart rate is shallow 
This man is a mess, call Dr. Callow 
Get me a restraint, he needs surgery right away 
Pull out the gurney, it's an emergency I say 
Watch it people, he's uncooperative and combative 
He might need an enema or maybe a laxative 
He needs a morphine drip for the pain he's in 
and some oxygen now cause his breathe is thin 
Let's get him on the cutting board as fast as we can 
We need to help this unarmed, one armed man!! 
Hold him still while I give him this shot 
It'll settle him down so we can take him to op 
Okay, he's knocked out, calm as can be 
We need to document his vitals and things 
This medicine won't last long, let's make it quick 
And get ready to fight this unarmed, one armed man again! 
 

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These lyrics were written by: Beverly J. Mitchell
Good Weather You Do/Bad Weather You Don't 

As sure as the weather changes, so do your feelings for me.  When the sun is shining, you're making me 
happy.  When it's gloomy and dark, you're breaking my heart.  90 degrees-you're hot for me.  20 
degrees-you're cold and icy.  How can I win?  How will it ever be right? 
If your love is based on the weather, I'm stuck with a losing fight. 

Good weather you do, bad weather you don't.  I'm searching everyday.  When I wake up, I run to the 
window to see what you'll do or say.  I wish the weather would remain the same, then I would always 
know if you are going to stay or if you are going to go. 

I cannot fight the forces of nature, oh how I wish I could.  I would make sure that our lives were 
always happy and good.  I wouldn't have to worry about what the day might bring.  I would know your 
love wasn't just a passing thing.  Wishes are like the weather, they change from day to day, but the 
one wish I have will always stay the same.  I wish for you to tell me that things are not as they 
seem, and the weather outside will never change your love for me.  But until then, all I know is- 

Good weather you do, bad weather you don't.  I'm searching everyday.  When I wake up, I run to the 
window to see what you'll do or say.  I wish the weather would remain the same, then I would always 
know if you are going to stay or if you are going to go. 
 

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