April 99 Winning Country Lyrics and Review

From the day you left me 
my heart has felt the pain 
My love has gone from rags to riches 
and back to rags again 
Our love seemed forever 
 it had no bounds no end 
Now I'm a loveless beggar with an empty heart 
and no love left to spend 

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Insufficient funds I have no more to give 
My broken heart is bankrupt 
and I find it hard to live 
Insufficient funds I lost my last love ounce 
My poor heart is writing checks 
that will surely bounce 
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You picked the lock around my heart 
and helped yourself to love 
I let you in and out my heart 
and thanked the lord above 
Now I'm sad and lonely 
It's true I have no one 
My love account is overdrawn 
There's insufficient funds 
 

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          What Eric knows is a lesson we all should learn - how to write about an age old subject in a fresh and unique way. Eric accomplished this with good use of metaphor; a broken heart and an empty bank account. Both are misfortunes - relationships and financial matters are very complex and sometimes hard to understand. Favorite line: 'My poor heart is writing checks that will surely bounce.'

Bravo, Eric, please send more.