November 98 Winning Country Lyrics and Review

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These winning lyrics were written by:  John M. Stevens  (c)1998
The List 

A father called his grown son to the side of his deathbed
A pencil in his hand, he smoothed his paper out and said
"I'll take along a message to the loved ones that you've missed
Tell me who, and I will make a list"

The son said,"You'll see Mama standing just inside the gate
Whisper that I'll see her when I meet my final fate
Tell her that I miss her smile and tender mother's kiss
That is why I want her on your list

"Tell my dear old Grandma that I'll see her by and by
Tell her that I'm sorry that we never said goodbye
Make sure that she knows her quiet strength is sorely missed
Add my sweet grandmother to the list

"Daddy, when you look upon the wondrous face of Christ
Thank Him for the good things I've been given in my life
Tell Him that without Him I would surely not exist
And have Him bless the people on your list"

The father said, "I love you, son" and laid his pencil down
Drew his final breath and passed away without a sound
And when the man was buried, one detail could not be missed
For in his withered hand he held The List

 

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This review written by LyricsReview.com judge:  Al Coda
Score:

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    Hooks 

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    15         Total Score
Lyrics: The List
Author: John M. and Charles M. Stevens



Judges Comments:

I have heard it said many times over the years - "Don't write story songs." The reasoning always eluded me, for some of the most successful songs, ever, are story songs, especially in country music. "The List" is a marvelous example of a story song. All essential elements are present: interesting subject matter, strong emotion,  sturdy form and very good iambic pentameter. Well done!

Good going John M. Stevens , please send us  more.
 
 

 

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