September 98 Winning Country Lyrics and Review

 His face was weathered by the sun 
Like leather it was tanned 
The story lines carved deep upon 
Told tales of a hardened man 

The tale not told was his alone 
Its' weight he barely could stand 
The years effect had marked this man 
Like cattle, HE wore HIS brand 

(Refrain) 

Oh Lord, my God, this life has failed me 
Like a prison I can't escape from 
Please take me Lord and end my sorrow 
I'm tired, Lord, please bring me home 

I'd loved her more than she could know 
He's robbed me of my life 
What I had done any man would do 
I loved, but lost my wife 

(Refrain) 

Oh Lord, my God,  this life has failed me 
Like a prison I can't escape from 
Please take me Lord and end my sorrow 
I'm tired, Lord, please bring me home 
 
 

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    Emotion 

            Hooks 

    Music Ability 

This is good work - strong emotion and nice phrasing. And effective description - the lyrics paint a clear picture of a hardened man with it's rancher / cowboy flavoring of the words.

Alright there Philip Miracle and please send us some more.