April 99 Winning Folk Lyrics and Review

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These winning lyrics were written by:  David M. Bailey (c) 1998
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They met for coffee every morning in the subway 
Had a smoke before the 8:13 arrived 
He was always just a bit hung-over 
She said it was a wonder he was still alive 

He always said that life is learning to walk fences 
She'd say it was more like walking through a maze 
He'd reply that every turn had consequences 
She'd say "I know, I've tried at least 1000 ways." 

They used to laugh about they way they talked in circles 
And wonder about the bridges they had burned 
He said freedom had always been his first love 
She said freedom's in the lessons you have learned 

He said "I don't know why people call me reckless 
She said "because you never look before you leap 
He said "but jumping off a fence is not so dangerous 
It depends on the company you keep 

She said 'is that your way of saying that you trust me 
Or that you tired of living all alone 
Who is there to hold you when you get lost? 
Who is there to welcome you back home? 

His silence was thicker than the coffee, 
Then he whispered 'you're the only one who cares 
She smiled and said 'is that an invitation?' 
Cuz somehow it feels more like a dare 

He said "no, I'm pretty sure that was a question" 
I know I've made mistakes along the way 
But you made me to believe in 2nd chances 
So I'm taking my biggest chance today 

Her silence lasted longer than the summer 
as she stared past him into the morning crowd 
He said don't worry bout giving me an answer 
but she cut him off and wondered  right out loud 

She said everyone I know thinks I am cautious 
He said everyone you know is probably right 
She said But you made me believe in taking chances 
I never thought I could but I just might... 

He said we'd never have to stop this conversation 
If we hurry we could take the 9:05 
She said i guess  my maps won't do me any good now' 
This must be what it's like to feel alive. 
 

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This review written by LyricsReview.com judge:  R. Peggio
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    13          Total Score
Lyrics: They met... 
Author: David M. Bailey 

Judges Comments:

     When I read these lyrics I felt as if I were eavesdropping. Like I was at the next table listening in. You can feel the man's reservation as he struggles to talk to the woman about a second chance while suffering woth a hangover. Vivid. Also, I enjoyed the 'He said / she said' format.
    Pop Quiz: How much time does their conversation take?

Excellent, David, send us more! 
 
 

 

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