August 98 Winning Folk Lyrics and Review

If I could only talk to Sarah for a while, 
She'd know just how I feel 
Inside, the conversation holds a truth 
My best disguise cannot conceal, 
'Missing You's and 'How you been?'s 
'We'll have to get together now and then.' 
But the moments between now and then I spend, 
Are best described as wasted time. 

If I could only talk to Sarah, 
Even for a moment, I'd be fine, 
Though the words I gently walk around, 
She always knows what's on my mind, 
The words are coming easier, 
It comes down to the truth's not hard to tell, 
Commanding all my courage, 
I will say those words and wait for time to tell. 

If I could only talk to Sarah for a while, 
I know I'd be allright. 
If I could only talk to Sarah, even for a moment, 
I'd be fine. 
If I could only talk to Sarah... 
 

      Composition 

              Flow 

      Emotion 

              Hooks 

      Music Ability 

We humans, all seem to have an unrequited need for deep connection.  As I listen to these words, I drift back to some of my own relationships. Telling this story against a folk backdrop is comfortable and easy. The music could add as much as the lyrics. I hear harmony and guitars and probably the gentle rhythm of brushes. This one works well on the emotions and is easily related to. 

Good one Dan Davis / David Marsh, now send us some more.