March 99 Winning Folk Lyrics and Review

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These winning lyrics were written by:  Robert George
Superstition Highway

Breakfast Jack and a chocolate shake
two hours to Wickieup
empty fast food containers
make handy spitting cups
I'm a jobber to the moon towns
that circle Phoenix close
selling gas, I make a killing
as far as a living goes
but it's never been the money
or the houses that I own
it's the miles between deliveries
that make me feel at home

empty desert boxcars, where gold moons stowaway
smuggled town to town, what keeps us heading down
the Superstition Highway 

the desert wind sings with a brogue
brother, just like it talks
where new towns and prickly pears
grow up out of rocks
I still cross Salt River, but now
there's no fishing from the bridge
tramps ignore tresspass signs
and sleep on Overlook ridge
small stations pay me to put
cheap gas in the supreme
sundowns, only this highway
is just what it seems

empty desert boxcars, where gold moons stowaway
smuggled town to town, what keeps us heading down
the Superstition Highway

I made sure we showed profit
with every handshake deal
time swallows and spits the seeds
that's money's sweet appeal
with one month till I retire
I feel like the lonesome ghost
who learned he's got thirty days
to leave his dying host
a lifetime of driving this route
passing the same roadside graves
for a  peaceful spot like that
I'd give every cent I saved 

empty desert boxcars, where gold moons stowaway
smuggled track to track, what keeps us coming back
to the Superstition Highway
 

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This review written by LyricsReview.com judge:  R. Peggio
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    13          Total Score
Lyrics: Superstition Highway 
Author: Robert George 

Judges Comments:

     Robert paints scenes for us as vivid as any artist can paint on canvas. This is a prime example of the power of lyrics to create imagery in the mind of the listener. Roberts use of metaphor is noteworthy; the towns orbiting Phoenix and the soon-to-be evicted ghost are very nice, but 'where new towns and prickly pears, grow up out of rocks' is this judges favorite line.

Excellent, Robert, please, send us another! 
 
 

 

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