August 98 Winning Jazz Lyrics and Review

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These winning lyrics were written by:  Scaley
 Shift Time 

Float off 
And away we go now 
Double time 
If we can find the way how 

Slide up 
Nice and easy 
Keep it light 
Light and breezy 

Shift time 
Fast and steady 
Sounds fine 
Like you were ready 

Blow by 
You can't stop me 
Here's why 
I feel so free 

Step down 
In this direction 
Slow down 
To reach perfection 

Ease out 
Let the rhythm ride 
Reach out 
To the other side 

We're back 
To where we started 
Home track 
We're so light hearted 
 

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This review written by LyricsReview.com judge:  Beat
Score:

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              Emotion 

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      Music Ability 



    12            Total Score
Lyrics:  Shift Time
Author: Scaley
 

Judges Comments:

This sounds like an outdoor jazz festival. Sunshine, light breeze blowing and horns in the air. I hear horns on this one! The feeling sort of works up to a peak then slides back down nice and easy. I think a female vocalist would work best here. I hear a steady, slightly faster pace rhythm for this one. Maybe dueling vocals and horn. The sky is the limit.

Nice one Scaley, now send us some more. 
 
 
 
 

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