December 98 Winning Jazz Lyrics and Review

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These winning lyrics were written by: Coltskorner
"Walking In a Straight Line (Straight to Nowhere...)" 

Desperate Ways 
Fleeing call 
Watch you run yet still I crawl 
Flaunt yourself 
What you do 
You fail to face I'm more than you 
Yet you try 
Cheat and lie 
But your work's not as good as mine 
Never wrong 
Always right 
But yellow when you're up to fight 

You don't prove 
Anything 
In what you do, in what you do 
Here's the truth 
It is true 
No one likes you, no one likes you 
And you aren't 
A superstar 
Don't claim you are, don't claim you are 
We are much 
Better by far 
Oh yeah we are, oh yeah we are 

Got no friends 
Just pretend 
Don't think so? I'll say it again 
Got no friends 
Just pretend 
This lie of yours will never end 
Underneath 
Your white skin 
You're still a liar down within 
Got no class 
Yeah it's true 
You should work on your attitude 

You don't prove 
Anything 
In what you do, in what you do 
Here's the truth 
It is true 
No one likes you, no one likes you 
And you aren't 
A superstar 
Don't claim you are, don't claim you are 
We are much 
Better by far 
Oh yeah we are, oh yeah we are 

You do things 
You cannot do 
Yet you say you do, you say you do 
You're not strong 
Did I hurt you? 
Well it's all true, you know it too 
Now hear me 
So loud and clear 
You can't shake me, you can't shake me 
Never let 
You climb atop 
Soon you will stop, soon you will stop 

You don't prove 
Anything 
In what you do, in what you do 
Here's the truth 
It is true 
No one likes you, no one likes you 
And you aren't 
A superstar 
Don't claim you are, don't claim you are 
We are much 
Better by far 
Oh yeah we are, oh yeah we are 

And you're walking 
Walking 
And you're walking 
In a straight line straight to nowhere... 
 

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This review written by LyricsReview.com judge:  Beat
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    14            Total Score
Lyrics:  "Walking In a Straight Line (Straight to Nowhere...)"
Author: Coltskorner
 

Judges Comments:
 
These lyrics seem to just "walk" on their own. They form an inherent sort of bouncy rhythm with phrase repeats for emphasis. This could be a light and slightly faster pace, melodic song. Good drum and bass work would complement a "walking" vocal style. I hear female vocals with horns backing them up. 

Way to go Coltskorner, we look forward to some more. 
 
 
 
 

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