March 99 Winning Jazz Lyrics and Review

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These winning lyrics were written by: Jenne Wason
Where I Left You 

I left my shoes 
on a street named Boulevard, 
A whole month's bills 
in some rich man's yard. 
I left my watch behind 
at the Scenic View, 
but I can't remember 
where I left you. 

I left the Dollar Store - 
Didn't have a cent. 
I let my freedom go 
to see how much it meant. 
I had to leave my home - 
That sky was much too blue, 
but I haven't got a clue 
why I left you. 

Always picturing a mirror 
with a new face, 
Imagining the blank page 
of a new place. 
Looking off in the distance 
for the path of least resistance - 
Then out the door barefoot. 
Gone without a trace. 

I left my youth 
beside the Seventh Sea. 
Or should I say 
my youth left me. 
I left my heart somewhere. 
Where, I wish I knew. 
But I guess it's right around 
where I left you. 

I left my heart somewhere. 
God, I wish I knew. 
But I know it must be there 
where I left you. 
 

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This review written by LyricsReview.com judge:  Beat
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    14            Total Score
Lyrics:  Where I Left You
Author: Jenne Wason
 

Judges Comments:
 
Absolutely excellent lyrics! Very intelligent with good expression and word play. The individual expressions are choice and all contribute to building the theme. These lyrics could fit almost any musical venue, but jazz would be ideal. I can almost hear the music now. A melodic, medium pace rhythmic bass line would sound great. Brushed drums and maybe a clarinet floating in the background could add to the light and breezy feel. I really hear female vocals, with a soulful edge, on this one. Wow! 
 

Superb, Jenne, we want to hear more, please! 
 
 

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