September 98 Winning Jazz Lyrics and Review

 Chorus: 

 I don't have the blues 
 'Cause I'm feeling too fine 
 The bands getting tight 
 And they're doing it right, on time 
  : 

We're swaying the house 
Everyone's got the beat 
The rhythm is flowing 
They move without knowing, how sweet 

Our hand's on the switch 
We have total control 
Enjoy the ride 
Until your other side, is whole 

The sound is simple 
Music makes it right 
Frees your soul to soar 
Who could ask for more, tonight 

Chorus: 
 

      Composition 

      Flow 

              Emotion 

      Hooks 

      Music Ability 

I really like the way this one is written. I like the punch at the end of the last line of each verse and chorus. I can hear this being emphasized by the instruments. Big time! I think maybe male and female vocals switching off every other line and then together on the punch could sound jazzy. A slightly faster beat would work well here. Nice writing, a real "feat".

Great one Dan Berkley, now send us some more.