August 98 Winning Other Lyrics and Review

Having you 
Has been more than 
Ever wanting to 

I can't imagine 
A day any different 
I am full 

For you are all 
I never knew 
What true love meant 

Sometimes it's hard 
While we find our way 
But those moments of joy 
Just brighten the day 

With your smile 
It's all new to you 
We're everything that you know 
You're the song that we sing 
We love and watch you grow 

Can't see too far ahead 
Just focus on here and now 
Enjoy the learning that you do 
To share in it all someway somehow 

Your independence grows 
Day by day 
You develop a voice 
With it you say 

What is your wish 
You express your will 
You is a new word 
It sounds new still 

We respect this development 
You must grow 
You must redefine extents 

We watch and help 
As best we can 
To nurture growth 
To lend a hand 

When you need us 
We are your safety net 
You still need us 
Not too big yet 

But soon you will be 
This is the cycle 
You'll want to go free 
And we're left with only memory 

Of tiny feet 
Of a flirty little dance 
A precious treat 
Of happenstance 

Of all those things 
That growing is about 
Will someday seem 
So long ago 

Bless you much and forever 
I love you now and forever 
Help me to share 
As much as I can 
But to remember these days forever 

With love and care 
If only I possibly can 
 

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This one makes my heart warm. It's on the long side, but it flows smoothly through its development. I'm thinking something like a ballad or theme song. I hear pretty, soothing music. Probably some flute and violins. Yes, I'm serious. All and all, it sounds like the kind of reflective recounting of good times, life times, past. I enjoyed this one very much.

Good one Tom and Sally Drake, now send us some more.