December 98 Winning Other Lyrics and Review

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These winning lyrics were written by: Paul J Radford
Super Hero 

I bought a paper the other day 
More bad news is on the way 
Twenty-eight bodies in North Ireland rubble 
Better get on that, on the double 
They're fighting again in Afghanistan 
The rebels there have made a stand 
In Northern Belfast they pick up the pieces 
In a school somewhere it's someone's thesis 

So please get back here on the double 
The whole wide world's in a heap of trouble 
And you're my super hero 
Yeah, you're my super hero 
This will be your finest hour 
'Cause you're the one with all the power 
To make this madness disappear 
To get us through another year 
My super hero 

Turned on the TV the other day 
More bad news is on the way 
In a church in England they honor their dead 
When a constable falls we must forge ahead 
They're searchin' for bodies in Lebanon 
She weeps for her family, they're all gone 
In Washington I was shocked to see 
They caught the President doin' the nasty 

So please get back here mighty quick 
Our world, you see, is awfully sick 
And you're my super hero 
Yeah, you're my super hero 
My night in shining armor, benevolent defender 
You'll fight to the end and never surrender 
Come make this sadness go away 
We'll live to see a better day 
My super hero 

I listened to the radio yesterday 
More bad news is on the way 
Children are starving in villages and towns 
They live with disease and sickness abounds 
In Nairobi they had one hell of a day 
An American embassy was blown away 
And what of Diana, such a waste 
A world in mourning, such style and grace 

So please get back here right away 
I'm counting on you to seize the day 
And you're my super hero 
Yeah, you're my super hero 
My beacon of hope, my inspiration 
I stand in awe of your dedication 
So erase our past and discard all fact 
And pray that our children may never look back 

Did you know you're my super hero 
You gotta know you're my hero 
My super hero 
Yeah, you're my super hero 
My one, my only 
Forever lonely 
Super hero 
 

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This review written by LyricsReview.com judge:  Sostenuto
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    14            Total Score
Lyrics:  Super Hero
Author: Paul J Radford
 

Judges Comments:

Besides very good rhyming, clever expression and excellent flow/rhythm, these lyrics get an idea across; well. "We, the whole world, need help!" It's refreshing to see the development of an idea, with depth, that makes us want to listen for more. The musical complement for these lyrics would have to be sophisticated as well.  

Excellent job Paul J Radford, please, send us some more. 
 
 
 
 

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