October 98 Winning Other Lyrics and Review

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These winning lyrics were written by: 3tone Derby
The Overly Expensive Hyped Up Trite Car Chase Scene In Every Action Movie 
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The sky is blue 
The sun is shining 
I'll be on my way 
With the right timing 
I got the money 
The crowd's on the floor 
I swear I'll shoot if they move anymore 

And just on time 
The cops arrive 
I jump in my car 
Kick it into drive 
But they don't know it's me they need 
Except for the cop 
Who for the last four years has been hunting me 

Now we're racing through the city 
Nothing can stop us 
Oncoming traffic, pedestrians 
I dodge them and a bus 
I'm such a great driver 
The envy of all my friends 
But I'll get caught I know it 
Right in the end 

So now we're in 
Dangerous land 
With explosive items 
No sign of man 
No matter how many times he gets burned 
He keeps up with my every turn 
Of course I cause some gas to spill 
(Now the audience gets their thrill) 
And somehow through the heat and all 
The cop drives through a fireball 
At last we're on a major road 
In between semis carrying wide loads 
They jacknife and flip 
But I drive right past 
Now comes the part when I go real fast 

And now we're on an unfinished path 
I've gotta floor it, no turning back 
And just to use special effects 
I drive off of a bridge and don't even wreck 
But of course the cop knows the streets 
And he takes a shortcut 
Now I'm beat 
With my final effort 
I drive through a store 
And crash the car 
My life is no  more 
But just as I'm about to be locked up 
I smile 'cause I hear the director yell "CUT!!" 
 

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This review written by LyricsReview.com judge:  Sostenuto
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    14            Total Score
Lyrics:  The Overly Expensive Hyped Up Trite Car Chase Scene In Every Action Movie
Author: 3tone Derby
 

Judges Comments:

These lyrics flow really well. It's a fun song. The kind that draws you in and gets you listening to the words. It develops well, with good expression. The music is probably on the fast side, melodic and clear. It might even have several temp changes for affect. I hear a strong and clear male vocal lead with occasional female harmonies. Maybe even some horns for that big sound when you "go real fast". The sky is the limit on this one. Lots and lots of fun.

Nice going 3tone Derby, can you send us some more?
 
 
 
 

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