September 98 Winning Other Lyrics and Review

All the pain 
all the fears 
only you can stop my tears 

broken heart 
swollen eyes 
can't you hear 
all my cries? 

Help me i'm draining 
save me i'm fading 
cure me of crying 
stop me from dying 

Internal bleeding of a bloody heart 
you and me can't be apart 
hold me tight,please don't fight 
stop my tears, take away my fears 

Bloody wrists 
infected knife 
hold me close 
save my life 

i need you here 
but your not there 
i cry for you 
but you don't care 

Help me i'm drauning 
save me i'm fading 
cure me of crying 
stop me from dying 

Internal bleeding of a bloody heart 
you and me can't be apart 
hold me tight, please don't fight 
stop my tears, take away my fears 
 

              Composition 

      Flow 

      Emotion 

              Hooks 

      Music Ability 

This feels like a big song. Lots of music and intense vocals. I hear a tenor male singer, loud but melodic. I think a really strong lead guitar would hit home. Did I mention strong drums? Ok, I think this is a strong song. Big and strong. It also has a great hook "Internal bleeding of a bloody heart". I can hear this one being performed live, as a favorite!

Way to go Sarah-Alexis Klein, now send us some more.