March 99 Winning Religious Lyrics and Review

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These winning lyrics were written by: Betty L. Johnson
Homeward Bound 

Back in my childhood-my mother would call me home- 
And, I didn't want to leave- I was having too much fun- 
I cried "Please let me stay- I don't want to leave my friends" 
But, she'd wipe away my tears- and gently say again.... 

It's time to go home- 
Come on now, take my hand 
She'd ease away my sorrow 
Like only a mama can 
And as we walked together- 
A smile replaced my frown 
I soon was running and laughing 
As I was Homeward Bound 

Fishing in the river- a picnic in the sand 
Catching tiny Blue Gills, with the worms in an old tin-can 
The time flew by so quickly- soon Daddy came around 
and said "It's time to go home now the sun is going down" 

It's time to go home- 
Come on now take my hand 
He'd wipe away my tears 
Like only a Daddy can 
And as we walked together- 
A smile replaced my frown 
I soon was running and laughing 
As I was Homeward Bound 

The hours have passed so swiftly 
The days have all flown by 
Where have all the years gone? 
Lord, they just seemed to fly 
My body's growing weaker- it's hard to get around 
As I turn my eyes to Heaven 
I seem to hear this sound.... 

It's time to go home- 
Come on now, take my hand 
He'll wipe away my tears 
Like only Jesus can 
And as we walk together 
A smile will replace my frown 
I'll soon be running and laughing.... 
As I am Homeward Bound 
 

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This review written by LyricsReview.com judge:  St. A'Ccato
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    13           Total Score
Lyrics: Homeward Bound 
Author: Betty L. Johnson 

Judges Comments:

         Home. When we are there, we want to stay there. When we are not, we want to go back there. I enjoyed the contrast between these sentiments and the way Betty illustrates that the journey is as rewarding as the destination. Note, also, Betty's use of the power position at the end of the verses to prepare us to enter the chorus. Nice work! 

Very nice, Betty,  please send more! 
 
 

 

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