October 98 Winning Religious Lyrics and Review

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These winning lyrics were written by: Walter Tokich
Mother's been sick and it doesn't look good 
The doctor says there's no hope, he's done all he could 
Mother is in pain now, day after day 
The doctor asks, "Do you want to remember her this way?" 

This isn't fair mother never hurt anyone 
Where is God now? See what you've done 
It's so sad to watch, but tell me what can we do? 
The doctor starts to tell us I have an option for you 

She can choose to die and end all her pain 
Why should she suffer? Her life has nothing to gain 
It's her choice she has the right to live or the right to die 
Why can't you understand, what reason don't you buy? 

Mother says its for me a way to end my grief 
She says she can't bear the pain, it's her only hope for relief 
I know for you mother the decision must be tough 
Don't say its for me you'd be calling your own bluff 

I have my own opinions and I believe what you're doing is wrong 
Please don't give up this life to which you still belong 
I don't want to see you suffer, but I'd hate to see you give in 
You don't want me to worry, you don't think it is a sin 

I'm begging you mother as a son and as a friend 
Please don't choose to die, I'll be with you until the end 
Mother went to the doctor for the very last time 
The doctor is on trial now, they're calling it a crime 

People have been twisting the truth from the very start 
Now if you become a doctor you can play the part of God 
Mother went to the doctor, for the very last time 
 

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This review written by LyricsReview.com judge:  ST. A'Ccota
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    11            Total Score
Lyrics: Mother's been sick and it doesn't look good
Author: Walter Tokich
 

Judges Comments:

This is a heavy topic for song lyrics and one I've not seen before. We all hope Walter has a knack for original song subjects, and that he isn't writing from a personal experience. The lyrics are so well written, its hard to tell. Walter demonstrates the ability to tell a story and make the lyrics read like prose. Very good! 

Really nice Walter Tokich, please send us more. 
 
 
 
 

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