October '99 Songwriting Contest Rock Winner

Here are Maddie's winning lyrics along with a review.
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These winning lyrics were written by:  Madeline Degan
LyricsReview dot Com (The Song) 

In silence she lays 'cross her bed 
The lyrics alive in her head 
Her words are so strong 
But the music's all wrong 
She heard there's a site on the Web 

A cafe not so far away 
The guitar man plays for his pay 
His music's so strong 
But the words are all wrong 
He'll get it together one day 

The girl takes a seat at her desk 
She'll enter the songs she likes best 
She enters her words 
That have never been heard 
And LyricsReview does the rest 

It happens the very next night 
The guitar man visits the site 
He reads through the songs 
And it doesn't take long 
He prints them out in black and white 

The girl gets the call the next day 
The man says "I'll meet you halfway" 
They work through the nights 
And the songs are so tight 
The CD released yesterday 

This had to be much more than fate 
Their fans at the concert can't wait 
Before their first song 
They say their fame belongs 
To LyricsReview dot Com 

When you think that all hope is gone 
Just can't find the word for that song 
Remember be calm 
The whole world's in your palm 
Click LyricsReview dot Com 

Remember be calm 
The whole world's in your palm 
Click LyricsReview dot Com 
 

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This review written by LyricsReview.com judge: Forte
Score:

     Composition 

      Flow 

      Emotion 

      Hooks 

      Music Ability 



    15      Total Score
Lyrics: LyricsReview dot Com (The Song) 
Author: Madeline Degan 

Judges Comments: 

     Wow! Sometimes we wonder if visitors to the site get it. If they can see what we see. We realize that choice lyrics set to good, solid  music is the future of LRc, but do they? Well, now we know. Thank you, Maddie, for showing us in such a wonderful and poignant way that someone understands; that our vision of the future of LRc is valid! Terrific song! 

Excellent, Maddie, and congratulations! 
 
 

 

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