February 99 Winning Rock Lyrics and Review

Being here I've never been better 
Being here I've never felt worse 
Flying above only to crash below 
Heaven's blessed me with a curse 

I am floating atop the water 
I am six feet underground 
Headed east just to get to the west 
The devil's on the pitchers mound 

I love it so much I hate it 
I'm drowning in the sea 
Looking around for nothing to turn to 
Please... Rescue me! 
Rescue me! 

I'm willing to give it all for nothing 
Why bothe to give it a shot 
Pleasure seems hardly worth the seeking 
When pain is all I've got 

I don't know the answer to life's equation 
I know what seeds I am sewing 
I follow the written map for this world 
Where the hell am I going 

I love it so much I hate it 
I'm drowning in the sea 
Looking around for nothing to turn to 
Please... Rescue me! 
Rescue me! 
 

      Composition 

      Flow 

              Emotion 

              Hooks 

      Music Ability 

           Thanks, Susan, for a song containing not a single overused cliché! And, no, your superior antonymal word-play does not lead me to believe you bi-polar. If you are as confused as your lyrics so elegantly illustrate,  and if said confusion manifests in lyrics like these, then (forgive me for being selfish) I hope that you do not get rescued. Susan, a song of this caliber deserves a title. I like this song, but not so much that I hate it.  :-) 
 
 

Well done, Susan,  please send another!