October 98 Winning Rock Lyrics and Review

Swallowed my pride with a mouthful of air 
Moving with a wave and a cold blank stare 
This scene is a desert with water as sky 
Ask me if I care, I'll probably lie 

I swam through a cloud of angel fish 
One of them whispered, c'mon baby gimme a kiss 
All my life I had one dream and half a wish 
To know if the spoon was happy with the dish 

Chorus 
Coming up for air I inhaled a thought 
You wish for things that can't be bought 
All the lessons learned are always self taught 
Robbing the riverbank ,you'll never get caught 

You always know when you've been used 
No scars or tears but you feel bruised 
Howling like a wolf from a windowless room 
Knowing cows never could jump over the moon 

Depth a pleasure its all here 
When people drown do fish shed a tear? 
Drinking all you want on a sandbar 
No need to dress up just come as you are 
Drinking 'til you drown..da da da da 

Chorus~ 
 

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These are just really good lyrics; the clever line structure, the play on words and the juxtaposition of ideas - drowning used in conjunction with children's nursery rhymes. I enjoy this unique writing style and hope to see more from Virginya.

That's the way to do it Virginya,  please send us  more.